Narration of my first draft

My persuasive argument thesis is : The mob psychology is not sagacious, even dangerous.

1. What do people already know about my topic?

 People already know that people don't want to stand out and this phenomenon cause the mob psychology.

2. What research has already been done about my topic?

 http://listverse.com/2013/07/28/top-10-instances-of-mob-mentality/   : The bad example of the mob psychology

http://brainz.org/what-mob-mentality/ : The definition of the mob psychology

http://terms.naver.com/entry.nhn?docId=1067839&cid=40942&categoryId=31531 : The common mind of crowd(The reason of the mob psychology)

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

 The mob psychology causes since people read someone's countenance have a lot of community spirit, and hide their opinions. It's not bad but when came it strong, they can cause damage to people. If people read my argument, they can considerate mine so the bad side of mob psychology can be decreased.

My narration